However, not all iwi celebrate at the same time. Some may begin festivities on the first full moon after the star cluster rises, or on the next new moon. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- A cluster is a group of stars that are near each other in space. When seen from Earth, the stars in a constellation appear to be close together in a pattern, but they might actually be far from each other. There are about 500 stars in the Matariki cluster, but only six or seven are visible without a telescope. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- From early June, before sunrise, look to the north-east horizon. Find the constellation Tautoru, or Orion’s belt (sometimes called ‘the pot’). Trace a line northwards from the three stars of Tautoru. Look for a faint sparkle of tiny dots, about the same width as Tautoru ...
Wow Maddison. This is an interesting visual display of your Parkour moment in time. You are beginning to add descriptive sentences to create a clear image in my head as your reader. I wonder if you could add more writing to this moment. I am very impressed by the detail of your picture. You could add even more by zooming in on the drawing.
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DeleteI will do that and make sure I make a very clear image of this moment.
I will put full stops if i do not have any and that is the same as capital letters.
good job maddison from hodan
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