Wow Maddison. This is an interesting visual display of your Parkour moment in time. You are beginning to add descriptive sentences to create a clear image in my head as your reader. I wonder if you could add more writing to this moment. I am very impressed by the detail of your picture. You could add even more by zooming in on the drawing.
my class and i are doing art like Rita Angus First we did dying like the picture Reflection: I wondered if it would stain clothes toolkit: We are learning to participate and contribute
Hello my name is Maddison My favirote colour is blue. Not today but last week Aaisha made me a ninja star. I wear glasses and they are red. I am exited to be making my first blog .
Wow Maddison. This is an interesting visual display of your Parkour moment in time. You are beginning to add descriptive sentences to create a clear image in my head as your reader. I wonder if you could add more writing to this moment. I am very impressed by the detail of your picture. You could add even more by zooming in on the drawing.
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DeleteI will do that and make sure I make a very clear image of this moment.
I will put full stops if i do not have any and that is the same as capital letters.
good job maddison from hodan
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