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  1. Whaea Georgia6 September 2017 at 22:53

    Wow Maddison. This is an interesting visual display of your Parkour moment in time. You are beginning to add descriptive sentences to create a clear image in my head as your reader. I wonder if you could add more writing to this moment. I am very impressed by the detail of your picture. You could add even more by zooming in on the drawing.

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    1. Anonymous13 September 2017 at 15:16

      Ok Whaea Georgia

      I will do that and make sure I make a very clear image of this moment.

      I will put full stops if i do not have any and that is the same as capital letters.

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  2. Anonymous25 September 2017 at 14:02

    good job maddison from hodan

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