How maui discovered eruptions Maui was the bravest person on the planet. He slowed the sun and stole fire from his kuia aswell.He is skinny,he has a necklace with his grandfather’s jaw bone,He has a kite.He chants karakias when he is in danger or he thinks he is in danger.It sounds like this :“Tena koa kaua e waiho i ahau ki te awhina i te ao” He chants that karakia near a volcano because that was a place that he went to and made a goddess angry then she made that volcano that was extinct but is now alive he is now begging them to stay calm so she does. He now chants another karakia that says “Kaore ahau e haumaru ana kia kaua e whara” and now he learnt his lesson to not be a rascal
Wow Maddison. This is an interesting visual display of your Parkour moment in time. You are beginning to add descriptive sentences to create a clear image in my head as your reader. I wonder if you could add more writing to this moment. I am very impressed by the detail of your picture. You could add even more by zooming in on the drawing.
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DeleteI will do that and make sure I make a very clear image of this moment.
I will put full stops if i do not have any and that is the same as capital letters.
good job maddison from hodan
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